I agree with @ethanis. For me, theres too much swirling and noise that detracts from what you are trying to draw the eye to. At the end of the day, you are the one who it has to appeal to though. So take feedback and do with it what you choose.
On the last design, I'd be curious what it would look like with the "swirl" lighter so that it's more in the background.
I'm no designer though and am probably the last person to take design advice from.