Feedback Wanted - my take on the Mirage logo for Tina chips (2 Viewers)

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I am looking for additional feedback on my inlay design derived from the Mirage logo. It's nothing fancy, but I would love to see where it can improved (or if I just scrap it entirely).

These would be for tournament chips. I have including some mocks, but the chip's colors and designs aren't finalized at all. I am really trying to get the inlay right first.

Any and all feedback welcomed!

 

[Cratty]

Would just expect your white border size to likely double. Tina's designers generally ignore any trim/bleed lines from us. I'd either just accept that could happen and move forward or kill the border.

One of mine, started with the same size as yours. I'm still a fan, but just fair warning.

 

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Would just expect your white border size to likely double. Tina's designers generally ignore any trim/bleed lines from us. I'd either just accept that could happen and move forward or kill the border.

One of mine, started with the same size as yours. I'm still a fan, but just fair warning.

@Colquhoun mentioned the same thing. That is definitely a noticeable difference (basically double). I feel like the white border is a really nice touch, so I have to decide if it's worth being more dominant than I intend with the mock. Great looking out!

 

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I have been continuing to tinker. Any thoughts on these and this direction?

 

[Colquhoun]

The first one is best. Keeping it simple has more appeal, imo…anything else takes your eye and attention away.

 

[bsdunbar1]

The first one is best. Keeping it simple has more appeal, imo…anything else takes your eye and attention away.

^this was my thought exactly.
Simple is usually better and your original design is simple yet clean & classy