alright i rewatched the finale tonight. i've been thinking about it quite a bit, too, and a lot of it really is not sitting too well with me. i've read so many gushing, laudatory reviews, but i just don't think the finale fits with the five seasons that came before.
my primary issue with the show is one of theme. as anyone who has read anything about the show has heard, the intention was to take the character of walter white and "turn mr. chips into scarface". gilligan also talked constantly about how the show had a moral center and how walt was going to get his comeuppance.
the finale abandons the scarface endgame and allows walt too much success and self-respect. it shows him with newfound perspective on his motivations and a willingness to subvert the most selfish motivations in order to succeed in his latest goal of enriching his family and giving them a chance to live free of prosecution. he also succeeds in retaliation against the nazis and is allowed a death that keeps alive the myth of walter white which would have been eviscerated had he been led into the DEA in handcuffs at the end of ozymandias.
my secondary issue is one of execution (with a bit of a thematic problem as well). throughout the entire series walt has shown himself over and again to be a second rate gus fring. he succeeds in some things, but he's primarily forced to live and die by his improvisation. his improvisation is often quite good, but nevertheless, his plans often blow up in his face and he's forced to take two steps back before moving forward.
in the finale, literally every single thing went his way. from the time the keys fell from the visor he could do no wrong. i'm more than willing to give dramatic license to television and movies and certainly breaking bad has used that license previously, but not so consistently as a way of favoring the protagonists. gilligan himself even acknowledged on a recent podcast, it's a rule of drama that serendipity is well-used when it gets characters into trouble, but it is much too often exploited when used to get characters out of trouble.
here, all the coincidences favor walt and/or the desired dramatic conclusion of the show:
- volvo keys fall into his lap
- volvo required no ice-scraping/heating, etc.
- badger/skinny pete are expert laser pen marksmen (forget the fact he's even able to locate both of them)
- elliot and gretchen stand perfectly right in front of the window so they can get lasered
- walt slips past the DEA/FBI/APD watching his skyler's house
- walt successfully plants the ricin in the stevia
- lydia sits at the table where walt plants the stevia
- todd agrees for walt to come to the nazi compound
- the nazis look in the car but not the trunk when he enters
- the nazis allow him to park perfectly so as to aim him M-60 precisely at the right angle and level
- all the nazis die except jack and todd die straight away and he and jesse are allowed to personally kill the ones who the audience most want to see die
- walt falls to his death precisely before the police swarm the place so that he can die without the indignity of cuffs and perp walk
one or two of these, okay. all of them, i almost feel like i was trolled. overall, the episode was just too "clean". everything was tied up with a bow. that's just not how the series has been until now. even the nazis' deaths were too easy thematically. every other "villain" has been complex and nuanced. there was no drama in the nazis death because nazis are some of the easiest go-to villains of all time. who cares if nazis die? no one. contrast that to tuco's or gus' deaths. sure, we were glad to see walt prevail in those instances, but the characters deaths had weight because we gave a damn about the characters themselves.
i wanted to see walt get his true comeuppance which simply could not be accomplished by allowing him to die in a blaze of glory fashion. he got what he wanted: his family is very likely to see the money he left with elliot and gretchen; skyler (at least in the fictional world of breaking bad) is likely to be able to parlay hank's and gomie's bodies into some type of favorable treatment; and he was able to go out knowing that his endeavors weren't "for nothing" as he often worried. frankly, i think ozymandias should have ended the series but with the nazis executing both walt and jesse in the desert.
the finale didn't undermine the series for me, but it was a letdown.