Hard to improve on that... maybe ask if they can have her stick her hip out just a bit more.
These are looking great (first viewing was on my phone). I love the light turquoise quarter (or whatever it may be). One concern would be the $25 in pots with those since they have very similar accent colors and I'm assuming may appear on rolling edge as well.
edit: I always speak in
CPC colors to J5 when helping with ceramics lol, so maybe on the quarter blurple and maroon? Might consider the hundo with dg firetiger, although the arc yellow/peach looks good too. I'm sure they'll be winners no matter what you do...