Post Your Mockup and I Will Brutally Eviscerate It (With Words) (4 Viewers)

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The Crystal Park colors were really just a place holder ha. Still working on the inlay and what I want it to say as well but everything is getting closer.
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Ok, because I’m a crazy person I’ve decided I’m going to build a full Back To The Future trilogy chip set to go with the movie trilogy. Already have Biff Tannen’s Pleasure Paradise. @MrCatPants hates Lou’s Cafe (shocked face) and here is the first mock-up for The Palace Saloon from Part 3. This will be a gold hot stamp set.
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Ok, because I’m a crazy person I’ve decided I’m going to build a full Back To The Future trilogy chip set to go with the movie trilogy. Already have Biff Tannen’s Pleasure Paradise. @MrCatPants hates Lou’s Cafe (shocked face) and here is the first mock-up for The Palace Saloon from Part 3. This will be a gold hot stamp set.
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How much attention do you need from me in 48 hours?
 
Not ones that are green on the inside, outside, and with green seeds - no.
Taking all of your advice, serious and not as much, here's what I ended up with. I agree on the logo, but not on the chips.
 

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Taking all of your advice, serious and not as much, here's what I ended up with. I agree on the logo, but not on the chips.
( would suggest you start a separate thread if you are looking for feedback on multiple iterations, this is generally a one and done lampooning)

Chips are improved. Blurple is too dark of a spot to use on black for much contrast, though. Same with the still green and green on green chip.
 
( would suggest you start a separate thread if you are looking for feedback on multiple iterations, this is generally a one and done lampooning)

Chips are improved. Blurple is too dark of a spot to use on black for much contrast, though. Same with the still green and green on green chip.
All good, I was just having fun with it. I was always going to stick to the first design for the chips, but might reconsider on the labels now. You have helped, thank you.
 
Ok, because I’m a crazy person I’ve decided I’m going to build a full Back To The Future trilogy chip set to go with the movie trilogy. Already have Biff Tannen’s Pleasure Paradise. @MrCatPants hates Lou’s Cafe (shocked face) and here is the first mock-up for The Palace Saloon from Part 3. This will be a gold hot stamp set.
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They have horses in Hill Valley?
 
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The red chip symbolizes the blood of the American Indian spilled by the swords of the mission settlers as they these Indians fought the Spanish colonist conquistadors ravaging the land for spoils.

The pink and yellow symbolizes pink lemonade, from the stands which the children of my generation made from scrap lumber and brawn. The blue represents the blue blooded American ethic as we were learned the value of the hard work and benefited from the promise of capitalism.

The orange chip symbolizes the orange fruit whose trees were perfectly rolled out over the land we inherited which are now completely gentrified and what once was a valley of fertile trees producing the nectar of the gods, is now lined with nothing but 7-11s and Hoggly Wogglies, defiling our proud heritage.

The black chip symbolizes my Italian American ancestors , paying homage to my grandparents who boldly raised 7 children in the Hills of the mission and gave me a home.

The white/brown chip symbolizes dirt.

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I’m going to continue adding to the story until you react.
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The red chip symbolizes the blood of the American Indian spilled by the swords of the mission settlers as they these Indians fought the Spanish colonist conquistadors ravaging the land for spoils.

The pink and yellow symbolizes pink lemonade, from the stands which the children of my generation made from scrap lumber and brawn. The blue represents the blue blooded American ethic as we were learned the value of the hard work and benefited from the promise of capitalism.

The orange chip symbolizes the orange fruit whose trees were perfectly rolled out over the land we inherited which are now completely gentrified and what once was a valley of fertile trees producing the nectar of the gods, is now lined with nothing but 7-11s and Hoggly Wogglies, defiling our proud heritage.

The black chip symbolizes my Italian American ancestors , paying homage to my grandparents who boldly raised 7 children in the Hills of the mission and gave me a home.

The white/brown chip symbolizes dirt.

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The inlay looks like it belongs on a jar of salsa produced in New Jersey.

The first three chips are fine. Then it falls way off. The black 20 has the Italian flag on it. The red and green are both way too dark of spots to put on a dark base.

The white chip symbolizes dirt. White dirt? Wtf? Also it's ugly anyway.

What is a Hoggly Woggly? Was that a reading test? I don't owe you my full attention.

This inlay will be a disaster at 7/8" size.
 

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