Well, I tried.. and in half a dozen different ways and coundn't find a natural fit without degrading the overall balance. But... all that re-looking made me do 10 other tweaks to things that only I would likely ever notice.. lol. Mockups updated in original post.
Edit.. Also, just adding to the past post: What I tried to do just for those curious as to how I went where I did... lets talk about theme elements. I designed the card I think clearly with a nautical theme, but the theme I was actually trying to target was a search for pirate gold (very subtlety!).
Element breakdown (some obvious, some not):
A. Crossbones (slightly down-shifted as well as a nod)
B. Horizon - waves under moons (night time)
C. General waves (near-sea)
D. Break visually.. but using the scroll pattern to symbolize opening a map
E. Starting to use some more tribal/mayan style design queues.. similar to pirate gold. As well as rounded rectangles that emulate coin ridges
F. Compass, in which the coin is the center of
That all said, I didn't want anything to be in your face style-wise.. it's also quite a bit of pain to balance busy-space vs empty space I've found, as well as make sure everything is mirrored. Major respect now to card designers! Definitely pulled out a handful of decks to get inspiration from and help with general layouts.
Was a fun project! If
@justincarothers decides to use eventually, all his.. otherwise I'll be forced to print some ha.
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And yes I could have marked up those letters nicer, but snipping tool is fast and I'm lazy right now.